Why who I am is not one event.

As part of my application for the K-Love scholarship to Colorado Christian University, I have been asked to write about an event or experience in my life and how it would influence my academic work and goals. It is a pretty cool question but I have been having a problem with the concept of ONE event. So I drafted this below entry as my essay submission. Please give me feedback on both the content and the grammar.
—- Start Critique —- Last Edited 1/5/2015 – Submitted to CCU 1/5/2015